Please get out of my head,
out of my thoughts, out of my heart.
If you really hate me, then take away
these tantalizing thoughts from my head
so that I forget your amazing beauty
and your icy green eyes. Just take this desire
I have for you and leave, because I still love you,
and I don’t want to love you anymore.
Project PocketSize, 4, #176 05-24-07
Thursday, May 24, 2007 at 6:29 pm
thats a big step.
“and i dont want to love you anymore”
i really like the way this one turned out.
and i see Project Bitesize has taken form. nice work.
Thursday, May 24, 2007 at 7:14 pm
thanks to all of those =)
Thursday, May 24, 2007 at 9:52 pm
what can i say? i like your work. just keep writing and there wont be a problem, lol.
Saturday, May 26, 2007 at 8:21 pm
hmmm…..
Sunday, June 3, 2007 at 12:07 pm
good resolve
Sunday, October 28, 2007 at 3:18 pm
wow… I used it to write my own poem… not as good. I really believe this!!!
I try to write from the heart, because i believe that raw, unadulterated emotion combined with imagery and metaphor/simile is the best way to write. That may just be an opinion, and not necessarily following the thought of others, but it’s the way i write the best. And, as they say, “if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it.” Thanks for the comment.
Thursday, December 20, 2007 at 5:26 pm
i sent this to my ex-wife and she didnt reply!! cold hearted cow.
sorry to hear that
Wednesday, January 2, 2008 at 6:54 am
Yeh…its a really nice poem and im going to say this to my x-bf cause i really dont want to love him anymore
Thursday, January 3, 2008 at 10:31 pm
Just the way I feel to
Tuesday, January 13, 2009 at 10:32 pm
love the ending!
Tuesday, February 17, 2009 at 6:09 pm
Jesus Christ, i understand you so much
if u get a way to be free of these thoughts, pls tell me..
fucking hell, it’s killing me..
Tuesday, February 17, 2009 at 6:10 pm
and yes, i still love her too
fuck fuck fuck